#051 | Translate, Don’t Copy - How to Adapt Your Story for Both

Last week, I talked about why Selling Kills Your Investor Pitch.
Because when founders pitch investors like customers, they lose trust - and focus.
Investors aren’t there to buy your product.
They’re there to buy your business.
But here’s the nuance most founders miss:
Your investor pitch and your sales pitch are deeply connected - but must stay completely separated.
Every week, I meet founders who either mix them up… or overcorrect.
They build one deck for customers, another for investors, another for partners - and end up with three different versions that are hard to keep up with.
They forget updates, and frankly, they don’t quite fit together.
I’ve seen founders give an incredible, emotionally charged sales pitch one day - and completely lose investors the next.
Not because the business changed - but because the language did.
The story stayed the same. The logic didn’t.
The best founders have one story - and they translate it.
The Mistake
Founders tend to fall into one of two traps:
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They copy their sales pitch for investors - focusing only on features, design, and product excitement.
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Or they overcorrect - stripping all emotion away and turning their investor pitch into a spreadsheet on slides.
Both fail.
Because investors, just like customers, want to feel something.
They want to understand the problem, believe in the mission, and sense your conviction.
That emotional connection draws them in.
But after that moment - the logic changes completely.
A customer asks: “Will this make my (or my customer’s) life better?”
An investor asks: “Will this make money - fast, and at scale?”
That’s the turning point.
Keep the emotional connection - but shift the logic to match the listener.
Translate, Don’t Copy
The foundation of your story - problem, solution, proof - should be identical.
If you’ve nailed that story emotionally, it works for both audiences.
But once you’ve made them feel, you have to change how you make them believe.
Because “what’s in it for them” is completely different.
Here’s how to keep your emotional core, but shift the logic:
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Pitch Element |
Sales Pitch |
Investor Pitch |
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Problem |
Real, emotional, human pain |
Real, emotional, human pain |
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Solution |
Clear, compelling, solves pain |
Clear, compelling, solves pain |
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Proof |
Data, stories, traction |
Data, stories, traction |
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Market |
— |
How big it is and how you’ll capture it - size of the pain, market potential |
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Competition |
Advantages for the customer in the market |
Why you’ll win and how you’ll stay ahead - scalable, defensible, timing fits |
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Go-to-Market |
— |
Strategy, channels, acquisition logic |
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Business Model |
Cost, pricing |
How money flows, multiplies, and sustains - repeatable metrics, unit economics |
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CTA |
“Buy / try / sign up” |
“Join / back / invest” |
You don’t need two stories.
You just need to know when to switch between sales and investment.
You’re not rewriting your pitch - you’re reframing it.
Customers want to increase business.
Investors want to see scale.
That’s the art of translation.
The Bottom Line
Your investor pitch and your sales pitch share the same heart - but they must stay logically separated.
Both need to be emotionally real.
Both need to tell the same truth.
But one ends with buy, the other ends with back.
That’s how you build clarity across every room you walk into.
One story. Two logics.
That’s how you win both hearts - and capital.
That's all for today.
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See you next week!